LAUAN404 - First Animation Attempt

In the last week I have been working on my first draft for my complete animation. While missing some scenes, I feel that I have done when with editing the animation with sound effects, transitions and camera panning.

I have received feedback as to how to improve my animation so far:

• Clean up the line art.
• Keep the antagonist in the shot for a longer period of time.
• More dramatic sound effects.
• First slime squishes too early.

I will address all these criticisms in my second and potentially final draft.